Slight disclaimer about my Haiku

I realised that one haiku I had written about my train delay from Glasgow to London had one syllable too many on the first line;

I have since corrected it, it should read;

Train stopped for so long!

Inspecting a broken line!

Over two hours!

 

Must proofread better. 🙂 I did work in Software Testing, after all. :S

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